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RE: New Nation [longish]

From: Beth.Fulton@c...
Date: Wed, 7 Nov 2001 10:34:04 +1100
Subject: RE: New Nation [longish]

G'day, 

>Well that's the basics so far. 
>What's the feedback?

Basics sound fine, though you may want to be just a wee bit beyond human
space to explain why you haven't "cropped up" on the alien scope (from
the
humans point of view) as yet. Assuming I've interpreted you correctly
and
you're humanoid not humans in space as such.

Beth


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