Re: UBW fict
From: DracSpy@a...
Date: Sun, 7 Feb 1999 14:28:59 EST
Subject: Re: UBW fict
In a message dated 99-02-07 10:53:31 EST, you write:
<< [snip]
>"There's none that can be done legally, I fear that the only out come
with
be
>the defecation of some or all of the colonies?"
I believe you mean "defection". I suggest you change this before you
post it on the web!
I thought that I got all of them, I guess I missed one.
[snip]
>"Do you think that the NAC will help the colonies before they break
off?"
>"No, if they do the area will degrade into an armed conflict what will
ravage
>the entire sector, to repair the damage to the resources what would be
>destroyed in the fighting would cost more than what it would take to
help
them
>out."
Huh? What he say?
do should have been don't
What he is saying is that the colonies will fight each other.
It looks like a good start on some background material, and I like
the idea and approach. But you've *got* to get an editor. <g>
(I'd volunteer, but I'm swamped right now.)
- Sam >>
Okay, does USING Word 7's grammer checker and spell checker count?
-Stephen