Re: [GZG] Thrusting in the Cherryverse

[Robert N Bryett <rbryett@xxxxxxxxx>]

I know some people are allergic to long paragraphs, but I don't  
really think anyone would even notice the length if the story was  
still any good.

Best regards, Robert Bryett


On 07/04/2007, at 16:27 , Laserlight wrote:

> > > With Honor, Weber's caught in two traps -- he's written so many  
> > > books,
>
> It's not the lack of new tech, nor the continuing war. It's that  
> the drafts need to be edited for length. If he'd cut every  
> paragraph by a line, that would improve things a lot.

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