Re: Unofficial GZG Fiction
From: John Leary <realjtl@s...>
Date: Sun, 01 Feb 1998 08:00:10 -0800
Subject: Re: Unofficial GZG Fiction
Allan Goodall wrote:
>
> On Sat, 31 Jan 1998 20:33:19 -0800, John Leary <realjtl@sj.bigger.net>
> wrote:
>
> >Robert,
> > Very nice technicial side, I am certain that all who take
> >the time to read 'Karla's kidnap' will enjoy it as nuch as I did.
>
> Well, maybe not everyone. I found the grammatical errors to be
> annoying. I wasn't too crazy about some of the dialogue; there was too
> much Rod-and-Don-ism.
>
> Allan Goodall agoodall@sympatico.ca
>
Allan,
The conduct of the conversation sounded very much like meetings
I have attended at work. Very realistic! Flaws help add a bit of
reality to the work.
Just a thought,
John L.
(I assume Rod and Don are a comedy duo.)