Re: Unofficial GZG Fiction

Allan Goodall wrote:
> 
> On Sat, 31 Jan 1998 20:33:19 -0800, John Leary <realjtl@sj.bigger.net>
> wrote:
> 
> >Robert,
> >	Very nice technicial side, I am certain that all who take
> >the time to read 'Karla's kidnap' will enjoy it as nuch as I did.
> 
> Well, maybe not everyone. I found the grammatical errors to be
> annoying. I wasn't too crazy about some of the dialogue; there was too
> much Rod-and-Don-ism.
> 
> Allan Goodall        agoodall@sympatico.ca
> 

Allan,
     The conduct of the conversation sounded very much like meetings
I have attended at work.   Very realistic!   Flaws help add a bit of
reality to the work.   

Just a thought,
John L. 
(I assume Rod and Don are a comedy duo.)